Submitted by Roy Dane (not verified) on Thu, 10/29/2009 - 20:56.
Jamie there's an "old" Hawaian proverb "No Rain, No Rainbows". Kudos for seeing the image, and capturing it while it was there. I like the exposure and the light on the trees in the middle of the image, and how they contrast against the dark sky. The only thing I would recommend is cropping out the tree on the left and the large area of parking lot in the foreground. Neither of them do anything to enhance the image or draw attention to your subject. Again, my contratulations on a nice image.
Submitted by Jamie A. MacDonald (not verified) on Thu, 10/29/2009 - 22:04.
Thanks Roy,
I agree about the tree on the left and realized that AFTER I uploaded :( But I kind of like the colors from the trees reflected in the wet pavement of the parking lot and DID make a conscious decision to NOT crop that out. It also adds negative space (albeit a bit busy for negative space).
I really appreciate that you took the time to comment!
And I LOVE Hawaii (at least Maui anyways!) Mahalo! Brah.
Jamie there's an "old"
Jamie there's an "old" Hawaian proverb "No Rain, No Rainbows". Kudos for seeing the image, and capturing it while it was there. I like the exposure and the light on the trees in the middle of the image, and how they contrast against the dark sky. The only thing I would recommend is cropping out the tree on the left and the large area of parking lot in the foreground. Neither of them do anything to enhance the image or draw attention to your subject. Again, my contratulations on a nice image.
Thanks Roy, I agree about
Thanks Roy,
I agree about the tree on the left and realized that AFTER I uploaded :( But I kind of like the colors from the trees reflected in the wet pavement of the parking lot and DID make a conscious decision to NOT crop that out. It also adds negative space (albeit a bit busy for negative space).
I really appreciate that you took the time to comment!
And I LOVE Hawaii (at least Maui anyways!) Mahalo! Brah.
Love this pic. It's very
Love this pic. It's very surreal.